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peliharaan kumendan cihuahua
peliharaan ane kucing persia
kalau memang tidak dapat restu orang tua
yah sudah deh kite bersahabat saja...........

temen ane suka makan soto babat
adik ane suka ke taman ria
walaupun kita bersahabat
yang penting tetap setia

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temen ane suka makan soto babat
adik ane suka ke taman ria
walaupun kita bersahabat
yang penting tetap setia

Adik kumendan suka ke taman ria
tapi ane kepingin lihat taman safari
bener ndan kita tetep sahabatan setia
tapi cinta ane sudah mendalam negeri
(auch gombal mode: on)

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Adik kumendan suka ke taman ria
tapi ane kepingin lihat taman safari
bener ndan kita tetep sahabatan setia
tapi cinta ane sudah mendalam negeri
(auch gombal mode: on)

kalau akang ke teman safari
jangan lupa pergi sama papa
kalau cinta akang sudah mendalam negeri
itu maksudnya apa?
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kalau akang ke teman safari
jangan lupa pergi sama papa
kalau cinta akang sudah mendalam negeri
itu maksudnya apa?
Betul ndan ane tidak lupa sama papi
Betul ndan ane juga tidak lupa sama mami
Maksud cinta mendalam negeri
itu artinya cinta setengah mampus..........eh setengah mati

NB:
Sory agak telat infonya mendalam negeri ituseperti kata slank dari Surabaya yang artinya sampai dalam sekali


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wah saling berbalas pantun nih disini...
cuma ada satu pantun yg fail nih...
baris kedua lebih dari 12 suku kata...

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Tambah lagi ndan:

Padi pulut dari Malaka
janganlah dibungkus dengan daun kemumu
Hatiku patah karena cinta
Bilakah dinda kita akan bertemu

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hehehehe iye ndan, ane ralat ya buat pantunnya

Padi pulut dari Malaka
Jangan dibungkus daun kemumu
Hatiku patah karena cinta
Bilakah dinda kita 'kan bertemu

Mohon petunjuknya ndan. Thanks anyway

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hehehehe iye ndan, ane ralat ya buat pantunnya

Padi pulut dari Malaka
Jangan dibungkus daun kemumu
Hatiku patah karena cinta
Bilakah dinda kita 'kan bertemu

Mohon petunjuknya ndan. Thanks anyway

baru pas tuh 12 suku kata...

rima 8-12 suku kata dan bersajak a-b-a-b
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Cihuu, dapat pujian dari kumendan Chandra_Dewi. Kamsia Kamsia

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jalan jalan bersama eyang
orang ribut pake parang
halo semua selamat siang
apakah disini ada orang?


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Cihuu, dapat pujian dari kumendan Chandra_Dewi. Kamsia Kamsia

miss kali ndan..
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Pantun ane lagi ndan:

Banyak bukit sembarang bukit
tidaklah setinggi Kinibalu
Banyak sakit sembarang sakit
Tidak sesakit menanggung rindu
================== ======
Ke Surabaya beli sepatu
Sepatu kulit mahal harganya
Tahukah dinda menanggung rindu
Hatiku sakit ingat adinda
================== ========
Ikan bakar enak dimakan
ikan kerapu itu resepnya
Haus lapar boleh ditahan
Hati rindu apa obatnya

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