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pingpong
27th May 2012, 07:12 PM
menurut agan agan semua..... lagu band ane itu gimana si gan....



ane butuh banget masukan nih ....



kalo mau mengkritik pedes silahkan gan....



ane bingung..susah bgt masuk label rekaman...hehhehehehee







ni link downloadnya



http://www.4*shared.com/audio/OAnuPR...engejarmu.html (http://www.4*shared.com/audio/OAnuPRaU/iluvia_mengejarmu.html)



note : %2A jangan lupa dihilangin





sekarang ane tambah video hasil ngamen ane gan.. monggo di lihat ya gan.. buffer dikit..




[/spoiler] for videonya gan:
















kalo gak keluar, ini linknya


for link:




[youtube]Ui6ydN4IyUk (http://[youtube]Ui6ydN4IyUk)













makasi yah agan2 yang udah memberikan kritik dan saran...

moga2 kebaikan agan2 dibales nanti.....aminnnnnnnnnnn...heheehhehe









maaf newbie jd berantakan bikin threadnya :ganteng:



jgn lupa di coment ya agan2......



:loveindonesia:loveindonesia









agan2 yang udah komen.....


for komen positif:







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Originally Posted by studiow3b
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=523849165#post523849165)


cakep gan :mantap:














Originally Posted by esadu
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=526254994#post526254994)


gini gan klo mnrut ane bass nya terlalu middle jd suara bass nya dengung bgt coba middle d kurangin trus vokal agak d ksh effect byar gk kyk suara orang live kyk gk nyatu gan sm rhytym nya... yg laennya udh oke gan :sundul:














Originally Posted by MarioFla
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=526704974#post526704974)


:shakehand: lumayan gan .. coba bikin yang laen gan ane mau denger :D














Originally Posted by oktober10
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=530048437#post530048437)


mayan lah gan http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/smilies/kaskus_radio.gif














Originally Posted by Luca90
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=530064741#post530064741)


lagunya model2 sheila on 7 ye gan :D

suara vokalis rada mirip sammy kerispatih

latihan terus bro..hehe

kalo perlu maen aliran yg lebih menantang

misal jazz,atau blues

kyknya ente cocok disitu..














Originally Posted by shinryo23
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=530065239#post530065239)


:2good:

Lagunya bagus...



Dari segi karakter ada sedikit saran,



Itu karakter gitarnya kurang 'sreg' aja buat kuping ane,

verse & reff okelah, tapi pas bagian melodic, baru kedengeran...

(coba pake crunch yg nggak terlalu distortif, tapi presence-nya tetep wide)



Drums, Bass, String section, dll dah kimpoi, panning sempurna, mantep dah...



Vokalisnya??? Hmm,.. Agak tertekan ya pas take vocal?

ngopi dlu aja gan, santai... tp tetep main aman http://ceri.ws/smilies/small_ngakak.gif



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Kalo dari sisi mixing & mastering,

frekuensinya 'hampir' ngga ada yg tabrakan, udah ane cek, cool...

recording dmn gan? mantep nih SE-nya, hehe...














Originally Posted by Liwashiteru
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=530065396#post530065396)


ane gan http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/smilies/malus.gif lagunya asik gan,, karakter vokalnya ane gk asing tp ane kurang tau mirip sapa :D http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/smilies/iloveindonesias.gif














Originally Posted by nahdiar
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=530067920#post530067920)


nice nice nice



:2good:














Originally Posted by ppeejjuuaanngg
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=000000000000000666842893#post0000 00000000000666842893)


ane mah selalu dukung kreasi anak bangsa gan... :handshake: :handshake:

asal kan bukan plagiat

" say no to plagiarism"














Originally Posted by okem.adiyatma
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=000000000000000666832173#post0000 00000000000666832173)


bagus gan, kali aja butuh personel lagi. ane siap gan ;D



PM
















Originally Posted by luhurbudi
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=531239899#post531239899)


OKE BGT GAN!!! :2good:



ayo upload lagu lain gan!!! hehehe



:loveindonesia



















[spoiler=open this] for komen yg pedes:







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Originally Posted by laraswaticantiq
http://static.kaskus.co.id/images/buttons/viewpost.gif (http://www.ceriwis.us/showthread.php?p=524133934#post524133934)


vokalisnya suaranya jelek, chordnya pasaran (ngikutin lagu lain)














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