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Old 8th November 2011
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cerita nya bikin terharu.
Ampe bikin ane senyum'' sendiri kyak org strezz.


neh ane kasih ndan.
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“Saudara kembar dari Hongkong…” Wina enek, meskipun drim lelaki idamannya.
yg itu yg pling ngena n perut melilit om bimo ga brmaksud apa2 kok ,kan ane anak baik2

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kocak.kocak ndan
ndan dream'e medok pisan.
wes dadi wong jowo tenan ta.?
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Sangat2 Kreatif ndan sampe2 ketawa terbahak2 ane ..sumpah keren habis ndan dion,, +
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nais inpoh gannn
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Tiba2 dari belakang pundak drim di colek orang
“eg asu!” drim latah dan kaget, trus noleh kea rah yang mencolek pundaknya.
“Eh, maaf, nama kamu drim kan? drimboy?” Tanya cewek yang colek drim
“Iya, bener, tapi panggil aku drim aja. Kok tau nama saya? Wah, resiko jadi orang ganteng ya, baru pertama masuk kuliah, udah terkenal,” drim ke geeran.
“Muka badak...!!!” Wina protes.
“Enggak, aku lihat nama kamu di absensi, kita satu kelompok buat tugasnya Pak Vals. Eh, iya, namaku Chandra dewi, panggil aja dewi” kata dewi sambil menjulurkan tangannya mengajak kenalan.
“Dream,” kata drim sambil menjabat tangan dewi.
“widih, tangannya halus benar!” kata drim dalem ati.
“udah jangan lama lama…Kesempatan” Wina nyambuang aja nih
“Drim, kalau mau ke Hotel yang mana ya?” Tanya Wina.
“ eh ngapain ke hotel?” drim mulai mikir macem-macem. Masa baru kenak ngajak Chek in? Resiko orang ganteng, mana nih doi cakep bener pokoknya SEMOHE deh…[SEmok Montok Heheheh…] piker drim dalam ati…
“Enggak…aku kan dari Singapur, di sini belum dapet kos-kosan. Jadi sementara ini tinggal di hotel dulu. Naik jurusan mana ya drim?”
“O…Tak pikir mau ngajak…Gini aja, gak usah naik angkot, saya anterin aja naik sepeda motorku ya? Sebentar…” drim lari ngambil motornya.
“Gak usah drim…!” dewi maunya nolak tapi drim keburu lari jauh.
“Hati-hati, mbak…Jangan mudah percaya sama orang yang baru kenal. Ini Kota Buaya!” Wina mulai menghasut Sambil nyiram bumbu pecel di nasinya drim.
“Ayo…!” teriak drim dari ninjanya.
“Lho, nggak pake helm, drim?” Tanya dewi.
“Gak usah, deket aja kok, lagian Bapak ane Kapolri kok tenang aja?”
“drim nasimu gimana nih…?” teriak Wina
“Gak jadi, makan aja sendiri…”teriak drim sambil ngegas ninjanya
“ASUUUUUUUUUUU” Semprot Wina


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Dim mengajak prita makan nasi rawon
“Kamu gak apa2kan aku bonceng pake motor” Tanya drim
“Nggak pa-pa, drim, emang kenapa?”
“Enggak… kan panas, gak kayak di singapur banyak asap.”
“Iya,sih…Panas banget, tapi gak pa-pa kok drim.”
“Jelas gak apa apa, wong dibonceng wong ngganteng kayak Christian Sugiono,” batin drim,
Oya di Indonesia wajib hukunya, kalo cewek di bonceng cowok untuk memeluk rapat”
“Emang kenapa?”
Kalo kamu nanti jatuh ntar di kira buang sampah sembarangan”
wah ternyata udah jadi aja nih meski blum selesai, kirain minggu depan baru terbit.
jadi pemeran wanita utama nih critanya...

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bantu koreksi deh...
ada 2 yg ga tau bener ato ga mungkin ada salah penulisan nama...
yg saya bold merah ya...
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Tunggu ya episode berikutnya
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wah ternyata udah jadi aja nih meski blum selesai, kirain minggu depan baru terbit.
jadi pemeran wanita utama nih critanya...
makasih mbak udah nunjukin kekurangannya. episode berikutnya akan lebih teliti lagi
emang lebih cepat dari jadwal, memcoba memberi hiburan buat teman2 yang lagi bt dengan junker

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Tunggu ya episode berikutnya


makasih mbak udah nunjukin kekurangannya. episode berikutnya akan lebih teliti lagi
emang lebih cepat dari jadwal, memcoba memberi hiburan buat teman2 yang lagi bt dengan junker
jadi penasaran nih, kelanjutan critanya kaya apa yah...
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tinggal buat pilem nya aja nih
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jadi penasaran nih, kelanjutan critanya kaya apa yah...
Di tunggu aja mabak, jujur ane kekurangan aktor cewek, bisa bantu calun2nya gak??? yang ane tau cuma mami eve dan sampean
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tinggal buat pilem nya aja nih
langsung di demo FPI
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